The park was pretty

First hockey tournament this year

2 weeks ago I had a hockey tournament. I play for the west coast hockey team. We were playing Buller and it was a sunny day. We beat them 9.0 it was a good game. This was our first tournament for this year. In this photo I was going to tackle the person from the other team. I had lots of fun.

the biscuits were good

     The biscuits were good

I see something that is golden and has chocolate chips in it coming in a dish towards me I Licked my lips I smell the chocolate chips.A smile spreads across my face and I say under my breath “hurry up Mum I want to eat them”. My mouth drops and tears of joy full from my eyes and my heart pound. The crunch of it going in my mouth is like thunder. It taste amazing I feel like it I am in heaven I Feel It filling my tummy. It is a dish of delicious biscuit.

Crazy things about the oesophagus

show don't tell amazing writing

We are learning to show don't tell in our writing.

I found it challenging to write a lot.  I liked to write this because I could say how  I would feel if it was me.