Tuesday, October 16, 2018

descriptive writing

We were learning to write a descriptive piece of writing in a moment in time.

‘Ding dong!’
‘That’s my call’ I whisper to myself as I step on the the dance floor in the theatre royal at the start of the holidays.

All I hear is the crowd screaming my name and cheering. I'm shaking I’m so nervous I just want to run away but In my body I am jumping up and down I’m that excited. I could hear my breath and my footsteps as run on stage. I can taste my salty sweet and see bright lights.The sound of my heart pounding take over the crowd like thunder in a storm I get ready for the first move and say to myself  have fun that it will be over soon.

‘Here I go,’ I think to myself excitedly.’

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