Baddy Daddy

Baddy Daddy

Jess

1.8.19

In the last week we have been learning about how to get our structure right for a narrative. My message in this story is that you should always stop and think before you make your decision.

Wee ow wee ow!̈ ̈ Put your hands in the air”! Hooted the policeman.

Ring Ring!  ̈Hi can you come bail me out of jail?¨ 

̈ What have you done now?¨

̈ Well long story short ̈

̈ Just get on with it ̈

̈ ̈Well it all started at 9:00 last night when I got hungry, so I decided to go for a
walk to find food. Then right there in the moon’s light I saw a lollipop stand and I
thought to myself that is exactly what I need so I rushed over and to my disappoint
ment it was closed! Right at that moment I saw how badly it was locked so I
thought I would just grab one and then lock it back up. So that's what I did and I
left the right amount of money on the counter. As I sprung to go home I heard in

the distant sirens, then came a police car. I thought someone must have crashed.
When he pulled up to me I yelled “Sup bro, tough night? To my surprise he
replied, 

“Put your hands in the air” and that’s how I ended up here.

“That wasn’t a short story but it was a dumb one so I will be there soon.”
exclaimed Lucy his wife.

The next day Baddy Daddy was bored so he decided to go for a walk, when in the
distance he saw a flash car that had not one scratch or one speck of mud on it
and he just couldn’t stand not getting a closer look. So he decided he would just
have a little look. As he peered around the corner of the drivers door he noticed
the keys sitting right on the seat. So without thinking he jumps in and said to
himself 

“This car is too clean for me and it looks like it has never seen a farm before or
even a speck of dust on it. So I might just have to show the car what he has been
missing out on,'' he whispers evilly. He went round and round the paddock, mud
raining everywhere like a sprinkler. A smile appeared upon Baddy Daddy’s face. 

As he revved the engine back into the park where he round the car, he thought
that he should probably take it through the carwash first. So that's what he did.
When he arrived back where the car was parked there was a police car right in
the park with a grumpy looking man with him. He thought  to himself.

“Here we go again”! He slides out of the flash car and put his hands up in the air
because….

́ ́Put your hands in the air! ̈ Hooted the policeman!

“Yeah, yeah just take me to jail! Sorry mate, it's just that I felt so bad for the car
because it looks as though it has never seen mud before so I had to show him.
Well on the bright side I took it through the car wash before I brought it back.”
The grumpy man rolled his eyes and then checked the car for a scratch, then
lept in and drove away.

Ring Ring! “Hello daddy” answered his 10-year old daughter cheerfully. 

“Can I talk to your mother please?”grumbled Baddy Daddy

“No she is busy making dinner do you want me to take the message?” said Ella.

“Well can you ask her to come and bail me out of jail?”

“Daddy what did you do now?”

“Nothing bad don’t worry darling”

You can hair in the background, 

“mum Dads in jail again” 

“Ohh come on” the mother Lucy reples

“We will be there soon mum said” answed Ella

The next day Baddy Daddy was shopping and he really needed to go to the toilet
but as he walked up and down the mall, there were no toilets. He screamed “is
there no toilets in this place or am I Just blined.” A few minutes later he squeaks
“ I can’t do this for any longer so he decided to find a bucket. After all that he
saw on the corner of his eye, blue and red flashing lights and he mutters

 “who put a curse on me, three days in a row going to jail is this a joke or
something?”

“Put your hands in the air!” Hooted the policeman.

“What ever” he replies with a stunned look on his face that they’re just pulling
up him when there are much worse crimes out there that he should be
patrolling.

Ring Ring! “Hello” said Lucy

“Hi um I’m in Jail again?”

“Oh for goodness sake what is wrong with you?”

“Well”

“I don’t care anymore, I’m coming” then it went silent Baddy Daddy knew that
she was rolling her eyes. Baddy Daddy muttered 

“ I really need to stop and think before I  do something because next time I will
have to go to jail for ever!”

The next day he was very careful with his actions because his daughter said as
politely as she could 

“Dad I don’t want you to go to jail forever please stop”! At that moment it hit him,
he needed to stop before he did something really bad. Every decision he made
he stopped and thought before he did it and the rest of the day went like a
breeze. He had finally stopped the so called curse.